Mess

المنتديات
Just when things start to settle down mess roams over the place!I feel dizzy. Mess is all that I can see. Just when i spread my wings to hold the vast sky i feel captivated by heavey iron chains holding me back and pushing me into a deep dark hole. I fall and fall. I screem, as loud as i can, but it seems i am all alone. No one hears my screams, not even me. I try to breath. Black smoke fills my lungs. It seems like it is the end of me.So ugly and dark!
Still falling, no voice in my throat, no breath in my chest, I close my eyes.A face clears up in the dark. A bright pair of eyes stare at my misery and give me an encouraging smile. I fall in love with those adorable eyes. I hold out my hand to reach the face and it vades away smiling in the dark. Very irritated i suddenly open my eyes.
It seems that the hole has a bottom after all. I feel, see and hear nothing. It sounds I am on earth again! I feel the ground with my hands and stand up again. It seems now I can breath. I fill my lungs with air which is not fresh, but it is not a dark smoke either. Now i think how to get out of this whole to the vast sky again.

التعليقات

red1

nice idea thanks judi!
I fill my lungs with air which is not fresh, but it is not a dark smoke either.
i couldn't undrstand it ! pleas can you explain it for me ? if you don't mind regards
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Judi

What i mean here is that this air is not fresh but it was not as bad as the dark smoke i was breathing b4.The whole idea is that things r not good but they might get slightly better.Thx 4 reading this friend
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red1

for this i have different opinion. i believe in that changing over from bad to good (better) is often visible! and if you have something bad and you will sudenly have something better you will see that the new thing is excelant because u used to have the worse ! but i couldn't understand the metafor meaning of your text dear judi! what is the meaning of the dark hole? and what is the new clean breath ? sorry for bother! but i am asking because i am interested in metaforikal literature!thank you alot dear judi regards
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